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Copyedit — spring gardening feature
A seasonal lifestyle feature copyedited in tracked changes, then published on the Bath Spa Publishing blog.
A seasonal lifestyle feature on the first sunny days of spring — garden jobs, edible weeds, home-made face treatments — copyedited in tracked changes for the Bath Spa Publishing blog.
The edit trims the piece from 1,272 to 932 words without flattening its voice. Doubling goes ("really sunny" loses its "really"), asides that stall the piece are cut, and advice is regrouped so related material sits together: the lavender-trimming tip moves into the paragraph about patios and pots rather than floating among the weeds. Headings are added to break the feature into scannable sections.
The finished article was published on the blog on 14 April 2021.
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- Copyedit a seasonal gardening feature for publication on the Bath Spa Publishing blog
- 1,272 → 932 words · 36 deletions, 31 insertions, 5 comments
- Published on the Bath Spa Publishing blog, 14 April 2021
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The pull of that first really sunny spring day is almost magnetic: drawing you out, into the fresh air, with the apple blossom and the tender green of new leaves. Warm enough to make lingering outdoors a real pleasure; cool enough to enjoy being active. It’s always a real sign of the seasons’ change when I can’t wait to dash out of the kitchen and eat my lunch on the garden bench.
It’s then I might notice all the little outdoor jobs I could be doing instead of having to scuttle back inside. Like pegging up the duvet covers to flap on the line – I love burying my nose in line-dried washing with its almost honeyed scent. The sun will also help to bleach your linen and the breeze will ‘iron’ it so you don’t have to. A good thwacking on the line can shift the deep-down dust from floor rugs, too.
This is a great time to clean windows, to bring more light into your rooms and so you won’t have to feel guilty every time the sunlight shows up the collected grime. Do them now and you can relax about it for a month or two.
Wash down patios and decking, clean the winter off your pots and freshen up the planting with primary-coloured anemones or delicate lilies of the valley. You could sit with a sketchbook and plan a cutting bed to bring armfuls of blue cornflowers, open-faced cosmos and friendly snapdragons into your home come summer.
This is the moment to get on top of the weeds, before they rampage and swallow up your garden. It’s much easier to lift them when the soil is moist. Give lavender and rosemary plants a trim so they keep their shape and grow bushy, not straggly. In my garden I have placed lavender along the new pathway, and can’t resist rubbing the leaves of our gnarled old rosemary bush as I head for the shed.
The pull of that first sunny spring day is almost magnetic: drawing you out into the fresh air, with the apple-blossoms and the tender green of new leaves. It’s always a real sign of the seasons’ change when I can’t wait to dash out of the kitchen and eat my lunch on the garden bench. Warm enough to make lingering outdoors a real pleasure; cool enough to enjoy being active.
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It’s then I might notice all the little outdoor jobs I could be doing instead of having to scuttle back inside. Like pegging up the duvet covers to flap on the line – I love burying my nose in line-dried washing with its almost honeyed scent. The sun will help to bleach your linen and the breeze will ‘iron’ it so you don’t have to.
This is a great time to clean windows so you don’t feel guilty every time the sunlight shows up the collected grime.
Wash down patios and decking; clean the winter off your pots and freshen up the planting with primary-coloured anemones or delicate lilies of the valley; give lavender and rosemary plants a trim so they keep their shape and grow bushy, not straggly. This is the moment to get on top of the weeds before they rampage and swallow up your garden; it’s much easier to lift them when the soil is moist, and you can put them to good use - by eating them.
I once read, or heard, a lovely piece of advice: when planning your garden, position scented plants along the paths or by doorways. That way, you can run your hand through them and release a cloud of fragrance as you pass. You could sit with a sketchbook and plan a cutting bed to bring armfuls of blue cornflowers, open-faced cosmos and friendly snapdragons into your home come summer.
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